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Some school are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, While other schools have a very relaxed dress code. (What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?)

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Some
schools
 are very strict about their
school
uniforms
 and the appearance of their pupils, While other
schools
 have a very relaxed dress code. In the following paragraph, I will outweigh the benefits and drawbacks of
children
 when staying at
school
. On the one hand,
School
uniforms
 make equal for
children
.
Children
 can not compare with who clothes are more expensive and more elegant. So,
Children
 from poor families were buried by friends and hates to go to
school
.
Accordingly
,
Teachers
 should be strict and force
students
 to wear
school
uniforms
.
On the other hand
, the Concept in the
second
 paragraph is a popular reason for elderly
teachers
 in Thailand was claimed. In spite
this
 of, I think it very outdated mindset. From my experience in a country where all government
schools
 are very strict in
uniforms
 and hairstyles, I found that
regulations
 make authoritarianism in
school
.
Accordingly
,
Teachers
 can severely punish
children
 if they wear
uniforms
 different from
school
regulations
. In my
school
,
Teachers
 supervise by taking a ruler to measure the length of the dress uniform to prove a student's dress is not short than
school
regulations
.
Moreover
, If
students
 break a regulation,
Teachers
 in the administrative department of the
school
 have the authority to punish
students
.
Therefore
, I think
this
 action of the teacher makes student hates to learn in
school
.
Students
 who were punished are shame and not confident.
Moreover
,
School
uniforms
 are not suitable for LGBTQ+ because
schools
 in Thailand are outdated to globalization morals that LGBTQ+ can not wear
similarly
 gender. Notwithstanding, Some administrators in government
schools
 have
a terrible attitudes
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 toward LGBTQ+. In conclusion, From my experience, I feel that strict about
school
uniforms
 has drawbacks more than benefits.
Moreover
, After I had studied at university, I was joyful because it did not have
a
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nonsense
regulations
.
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