You recently went to a concert and thought one of te singers was very good. You want to tell him hoe you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance -give details of your musical activities -explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Mr Radi, I hope you are doing fine and everything goes well with you. My name is Mohammad and, I am a huge fan! I would like to thank you for your great performance on yesterday's show. It was mind-blowing!
Last
year, I attended your Toronto concert, but
this
one was something else. I felt different
this
time and, I think it was because of the concert hall. Bell Center ambience was crazy! After your great performance, I decided to continue my Piano classes. I always make some excuses, but
this
time there will be none. I am not a professional player and, I consider myself a novice. I can only play some famous songs.
However
, I would be appreciated, it if you could provide me with some pieces of advice. I would be happy to hear some tricks from a pro like you. Again, I would like to thank you for your great show. Thanking you in advance. Your Big Fan Mohammad Lesani
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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