Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You’ve found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Sam, I was delighted to receive your letter and know how excited you are

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our movie plan

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the coming month. I am disheartened to let you know that I won’t be

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along with you for

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film. You already know that I am a diehard Marvel fan and always enthralled by seeing

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Iron Man from the Marvels.

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undergo

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training, which has been

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schedule

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60 days and I will be

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to Pune for the same.

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training will enhance my technical knowledge and it is

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vital for my job profile to climb the corporate ladder. As we have already booked early bird tickets to avail

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incredible show, you can take along my best friend Rahul with you. He is a cinema buff,

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he dabbles in writing movie blogs too. Apart from that, he is an extrovert, and I am sure you both will click together. Let me know how you feel about going along with Rahul for the film. Warm regards, Devika

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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