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Nowadays parents are forcing their word to do part time jobs in their free time. Write advantage and disadvantages of this phenomenon

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It becomes very popular, that
children
 are motivated by their parents to start
earn
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 their own money in case they have
a
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spare
time
.
This
 trend definitely has a number of pros.
First
 of all,
children
 start to feel
responsibility
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 for every dollar they spend, as they have a clear understanding of how much
efforts
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 they should make, in order to earn it. The
next
 plus of participation
to
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 a part-
time
 job is a development of
a
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time
 management skills, as
children
 begin to decide and start setting priorities among working, studying and relaxing
time
 frames. The
last
 obvious positive point, which I see, is that teenagers have to communicate with diverse
collegues
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colleagues
,
age
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ages
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 and interests wise, which will develop their communication skills and overall emotional intelligence.
However
,
beginning
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of
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working in high school or even university ages can lead to a number of problems in
children
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 lives.
Part-
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time
 job offers access to a particular amount of money, which is enough to cover some basic needs in entertaining and sparing
time
 with friends in a more exciting way, which can redirect the focus from studying to working. The
second
 problem I predict that
children
 could face is decreasing
of
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studying productivity due to increased physical stress on
young
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organism
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. The final disadvantage of starting working while studying is
possibility
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the possibility
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 to stop studying and begin
full-
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a full-time
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time
 career without appropriate education. To conclude everything which is written above, I would state that it mostly depends on a character of a person and his maturity level, as starting to attend
part-
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time
 job requires responsibility and a clear understanding of your future plans.
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