Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
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built
infrastructure, many Change the verb form
build
people
claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large and beautiful public spaces
. Somewhat, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces
for public
and make Correct article usage
the public
it
beautiful because Correct pronoun usage
them
it
will promote tourism and public health. In Correct pronoun usage
they
forthcoming
paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view in detail.
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the forthcoming
To begin
with, as we are thinking towards
tourism, the demand for beautiful outdoor public Change preposition
about
space
is Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
also
doubling. They are important for more than just aesthetic reasons. It provides a communal area for people
to connect with nature and other people
. Also
, it allows youngsters to participate in a variety of outdoor activities, such
as the famous "Laal Bagg" of Bangalore. It is a big garden or pari
. Correct your spelling
park
This
park helps to appreciate the beauty of the
nature, while Correct article usage
apply
also
providing opportunities for people
from various areas to come and spend leisure time and improve their general health. Besides
that, beautiful outdoor spaces
also
help to boost tourism. It attracts visitors from all over the world to view and enjoy the area's natural beauty.New York city's Central park
is a classic example. The city Was well known for business visits prior to its development. The construction of Change the capitalization
Park
central
park not only Correct article usage
the central
allow
locals to participate in a variety of activities but Correct subject-verb agreement
allows
also
attract non business
visitors from all over the world.
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non-business
However
, some people
think that spending too much money on beauty
of outdoor Add an article
the beauty
spaces
is a complete waste of money. Functionality is also
important. A multitude of applicable functions might be a priority for construction purposes. For example
, if improved transportation infrastructure is built, residents will need less time to commute, hence
they will have more time to spare. This
could result in an overall improvement in the quality of life. Furthermore
, functional towns are more attractive options for business
and companies to run Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
efficiency
and boost the economy which later can help create beautiful cities.
In conclusion, there Replace the word
efficiently
arevalid
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are valid
argument
on both sides of Fix the agreement mistake
arguments
controversy
. I am neutral to both Add an article
the controversy
point
of Fix the agreement mistake
points
views
as each Fix the agreement mistake
view
sides
has Change to a singular noun
side
their
own Correct pronoun usage
its
benifits
.Correct your spelling
benefits
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