Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

As we are progressing towards development and we'll
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infrastructure, many
people
claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large and beautiful public
spaces
. Somewhat, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor
spaces
for
public
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and make
it
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them
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beautiful because
it
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they
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will promote tourism and public health. In
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paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view in detail.
To begin
with, as we are thinking
towards
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tourism, the demand for beautiful outdoor public
space
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spaces
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is
also
doubling. They are important for more than just aesthetic reasons. It provides a communal area for
people
to connect with nature and other
people
.
Also
, it allows youngsters to participate in a variety of outdoor activities,
such
as the famous "Laal Bagg" of Bangalore. It is a big garden or
pari
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park
.
This
park helps to appreciate the beauty of
the
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nature, while
also
providing opportunities for
people
from various areas to come and spend leisure time and improve their general health.
Besides
that, beautiful outdoor
spaces
also
help to boost tourism. It attracts visitors from all over the world to view and enjoy the area's natural beauty.New York city's Central
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is a classic example. The city Was well known for business visits prior to its development. The construction of
central
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park not only
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locals to participate in a variety of activities but
also
attract
non business
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visitors from all over the world.
However
, some
people
think that spending too much money on
beauty
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the beauty
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of outdoor
spaces
is a complete waste of money. Functionality is
also
important. A multitude of applicable functions might be a priority for construction purposes.
For example
, if improved transportation infrastructure is built, residents will need less time to commute,
hence
they will have more time to spare.
This
could result in an overall improvement in the quality of life.
Furthermore
, functional towns are more attractive options for
business
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businesses
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and companies to run
efficiency
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efficiently
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and boost the economy which later can help create beautiful cities. In conclusion, there
arevalid
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are valid
argument
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arguments
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on both sides of
controversy
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the controversy
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. I am neutral to both
point
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points
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of
views
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view
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as each
sides
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has
their
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its
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own
benifits
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benefits
.
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