Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In these
days, Change preposition
These
cities
should be well in all aspects whether it is on services or attractive structure. However
, some people
believe that cities
should be well designed in the
eye-catching way and others feel that function plays Change the article
an
important
role. In my opinion, functionality is a much more important factor and Add an article
an important
further
I will discuss both views with relevant examples.
To initiate with, there is Add a comma
,further
plethora
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a plethora
reason
of functionality creates better livelihood of Change preposition
of reason
cities
people
. Firstly
, amenities such
as transportation, drainage, amusement, teaching, healthcare etc give quality life for cities
public. To explain it, a city
which have
all basic utility can Change the verb form
has
made
Change the verb form
make
be made
easy
everyday life of residents. Add an article
the easy
However
, people
do not have to go outside to find facilities.moreover
, amusement facilities such
as garden
can Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
relief
their stress. Replace the word
relieve
People
can have fun by making activities that made their stress reduce. Secondly
, more people
are attract
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are attracted
in
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to
cities
for purpose of educational
, business etc. To elaborate it, Replace the word
education
good
amount of facilities are draw rural area Add an article
a good
people
for work purpose, ,
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apply
however
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,however
this
will boost economy
of Add an article
the economy
town
. Add an article
the town
In addition
, business growth of cities
will increase, overseas
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and overseas
people
take keen
interest in Add an article
a keen
business
.
On the opposite side, having a beautifully designed Add an article
the business
city
attract
tourists. To explain it, other cites Correct subject-verb agreement
attracts
people
are attrect to explore city
and that create Add an article
the city
impact
on tourism. Add an article
an impact
However
, the earring of tourist industry will boost and this
is good for their city
. For instance
, the old forts which
located in the Jaipur Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
very astonishing. Change the verb form
are
Foreign
countries Change preposition
In foreign
people
are
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apply
oftenly
visit Correct your spelling
often
this
place to explore culture and tradition. Consequently
, the local people
of this
place can earn money threw the tourist. Furthermore
reason is Add a comma
,Furthermore
,
increasing population of Remove the comma
apply
town
. Add an article
the town
However
, most the
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apply
people
have to live in a well maintained
society and they prefer to live in Add a hyphen
well-maintained
well designed
Add a hyphen
well-designed
cities
. Hence
, beautiful cities
draw people
to live in their town and it male surge up
in Change preposition
apply
population
.
To recapitulate, both the aspects of attracting Add an article
the population
cities
and functionality is
considered before Change the verb form
are
toplanning
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planning
to planning
develop
Fix the infinitive
to develop
city
. Add an article
the city
a city
However
, on my side
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,side
second
option outweigh
the Change the verb form
outweighs
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