Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

Domestic maltreatment is becoming a big concern for everyone. In order to root out
this
,Situation I believe that government have to impose a strict low for recycling domestic mistreatment to overcome widespread elastic, diminish wind pollution, in ,addition to overcoming a health problem
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, the ruling body has to make a rule for recycling in order to stop the wide spread of elastic corruption these moulded products are easily available but they are not environment friendly they are non-degradable
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overuse of elastic is harming animal's life many stray animals eat them thinking it as an eatable Stuff. In some
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animals eat them directly somehow the turtle is the main concern because they thought elastic like a jellyfish whereas moulded and jellyfish are not having any difference in appearance. by imposing strict laws for recycling waste animals would not get harmed
Secondly
to overcome breeze pollution. There are no specified large scale recycling companies to whom People Can give their exploitation to recycle , as a product people think that burning is an easy option , and due to
this
, oxygen becomes acidic. If strict laws would be imposed
then
Companies will try to make Some action toward recycling home harm as a reaction citizens can breathe a healthy air At
last
Strick laws may help to over Come well-being problems, due to less recycling of domestic harm , individual's throw them anywhere, So these misuses contain Some little amount of moisture and water due to
this
a lot of bacterias and virus germinate from
this
,
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as dengue and malaria. A Survey was conducted by the health ministry to track the root causes of wide spreading dengue in India, as an outcome,as a
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they conclude that remaining moisture in plastic waste is the Main Cause . If government make some strictly actions there would be few requirements to raise fund for the hospital sector, and government can use the money for other purposes
such
and building infrastructure and educating the youngster In nutshell , by imposing strict toward recycling waste , nature will take a breath of happiness because these actions can help to overcome the wide spread of plastic, and air pollution will
also
decrease, not only these steps will
also
help citizens to overcome various health issues.
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