In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is highly debatable whether couples should be obliged to earn equally for the family after their marriage. I vehemently espouse that working for

both

husband and wife can be conducive since they can ensure a good social and financial status for the family.

To begin

with, in order to ensure

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stability of the family, it is the duty of

both

spouses to earn money. To explain, in the current era, where inflation is being observed by many nations, it can be difficult for one person to take all the financial responsibility.

Hence

, if

both

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to earn for their family, it not only leads them to gain a good economical state in the future but

also

ensure

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good education

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their

children

.

In addition

, when

both

are working

then

this

can ramp up a better understanding and respect in their relationships.

Hence

, there is a sense of equality among them and no one dominates each other.

For instance

, A survey conducted by The Guardian newspaper in March 2015 revealed that a 35% decrease in the cases of fights and

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had been observed among the families of married working couples. On the other side, some people raise concerns about the care of

children

of working couples. When

both

parents are employed

then

they have less time for their

children

which results in mental and physical issues in their offspring.

For example

,

children

may feel

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and sometimes they may indulge themselves

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bad company due to

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of supervision by their working parents.

However

, some family time on weekends or having dinner together can be a solution for

this

. To conclude, I completely agree that for a strong social and financial conditions, it is certainly

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responsibility of

both

spouses to earn for

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their families but they need to make sure the good health of their

children

.