Companies that use fossil fuels should be taxed more than companies that use green energies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that organizations that
use
petroleum should be taxed more than those Use synonyms
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
use
renewable energy sources. Use synonyms
This
essay completely agrees with the statement because it reduces pollution and is economically beneficial to the Linking Words
government
.
The primary factor, status, should impose more duties on companies using non-renewable energy sources for running their operations. As the taxes go up, the operation Use synonyms
also
increases.Linking Words
Therefore
, in order to remain more feeble, these organizations would turn to a more eco-friendly method of processing their businesses. Linking Words
As a result
, the pollution level of the country would go down. Linking Words
For example
, since 2017, Klj's policy of keeping its business 20% dependent on clean energy has reduced its carbon footprint significantly.
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Moreover
, the extra tariffs imposed on the companies using coal and petroleum will have economic benefits for the Linking Words
government
. Use synonyms
Then
, these taxes will be added to the Linking Words
government
's revenue, which in turn can be used in other sectors like healthcare or charity, which always require investment to meet the ever-changing medical standards. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Linking Words
government
of India's and China's record collection of GST in Use synonyms
this
financial year has enabled the finance minister to improve the budget allocated for health care and charity people.
In conclusion, mandating duties on corporations that Linking Words
use
coal and petroleum to run their businesses will be a good initiative because it will encourage them to Use synonyms
use
green energies, ultimately lowering the pollution level, and will bring the Use synonyms
government
monetary benefits that can be utilized in other areas that need it.Use synonyms
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Task Response
Expand the introduction a little to include more background or definitions related to fossil fuels and green energies.
Coherence and Cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, use more varied linking words and phrases between sentences and paragraphs.
Task Response
Ensure examples are detailed and clearly connect back to your main points. This will improve both coherence and credibility.
Introduction/Conclusion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed in the essay.
Task Achievement
Good use of specific examples like Klj’s policy and the GST in India and China to support the main points.
Coherence and Cohesion
Logical progression of ideas, from environmental benefits to economic advantages, is well done.
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