Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century.

Most children prefer to travel to the
zoo
.
However
, There have opinions that keeping
animals
in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for
zoos
to exist in the 21st century. In the following paragraph, I will outweigh the advantages and disadvantages.
Moreover
, I will explain my opinion. On the one hand, Having a
zoo
in the city has benefits.
Firstly
,
Zoo
is suitable for outside classroom education learning. Especially, In biology class to know concepts about animal species, animal breeding, and animal medications.
Secondly
,
Zoo
can be a tourist attraction.
For example
, Chiang Mai
zoo
can be a tourist attraction because Lin Ping, a panda born from panda's goodwill ambassador inbreeding, was born in
this
place and it is the
first
panda born in Thailand and inbreeding outside China.
However
, When Lin Ping grew up she was sent back to China.
On the other hand
, Having a
zoo
in the city has drawbacks. Because the
animals
in the
zoo
are strict in building place. They cannot live in nature. Some
animals
will become stressed and scared in
this
environment.
However
, It depends on each animal species.
Moreover
, there are new types of
zoos
called open-air
zoos
or safari. Its have a lot of spaces and are located outside downtown.
For example
, the Safari world located in suburban Bangkok has a lot of travellers and
animals
. In conclusion, I do not agree with the notion that keeping
animals
in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for
zoos
to exist in the 21st century because I think it depends on maintaining healthy
animals
and sanitary in
zoos
.
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