Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It seems that the ‘click’ has become the mere criterion of media and

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, in order to maintain a steady stream, news reports and reviews focus more on eye-catching and stunning events and achievements like glorious actresses on the red carpet and

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on the rich list.

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emphasis on appearance and triumph but ignorance on courses and other factors definitely

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wrong messages to the whole younger generation. It is undeniable that idols with remarkable achievements empower ordinary people in different aspects

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social contexts like war heroes, diligent scientists, devoted actors and talented players, who indicate the importance of precious qualifications people should acquire and the process to their final destinations.

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, all these are neglected with the promotion

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wealth, the result of exertion, and glamour, partly nature and partly nurture out of wealth, for general people, especially the young, are hardly able to observe.

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, there are several negative impacts our society should bear as a whole. Now that the path to fame is hidden and its urge is irresistible, youngsters will have to deploy their own strategy in its realization.

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, various and sometimes extreme

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like crimes and live self-mutilation do harm to others and themselves. As well as that, their confidence can be destroyed when they realize it is impossible to fill the immense gap and

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may lead to idleness. Another group of them may imitate those standards and ways of living, luxurious but unaffordable, which put the young in plastic surgery and debts and cause a series of social problems. Based on the reasons aforementioned, many youngsters step off the right track because of appearance and money-oriented social values, and the press thereby should not advocate gleaming parts of celebrities’ stories, but

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reveal the hardship and industriousness at the back.