Parents put a lot of pressure on children to succeed. Do you think this is a good or bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sometimes
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are obsessed with their
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's future, and to an extent, they may stress them out.
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pressure comes out of care and love, I am completely against it, as it can be an obstacle that prevents their
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's ambitions of being successful. Pushing our
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to be successful all the time is an inhuman pattern. It can affect their mental stability, to the extent, that they may harm or even kill themselves. As an example, the highest percentage of suicide attempts is among Indian university students, as they are struggling with the mindset of their
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and community of majoring in difficult fields,
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; they are not interested in them.
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, they barely accommodate their life because of stress.
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, students’ self-confidence is affected by criticism negatively. Much research confirmed that commenting on your
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's successful spots has a constructive impact on their self-assurance.
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, pinpointing their failed trials will destroy their confidence. Some people argue that the only youngsters’ motivation is reprimanding. Due to
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fact, assertiveness and pressure are necessary to avoid spoiling and keep motivation toward success. They justify their argument by giving an example of, the restricted bad-treating schools often graduate hardworking and clever students.
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, I disagree with them, because intimate treatment especially from the parent’s side helps young people to figure out their preferences.
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they will be self-motivated and successful. To summarize,
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unintentionally held their
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the responsibility of guaranteeing a bright future. As a consequence, they overburden them immensely. Some of the
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believe the speculation that being easy-going with the
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can spoil them. I wouldn´t say,
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, I believe that leaving young people to lead their future without pressure will end them up being successful and happy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic excellence
  • extracurricular activities
  • prosperous future
  • societal standards
  • peer competition
  • motivation
  • discipline
  • unfulfilled ambitions
  • resource availability
  • opportunity exploitation
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