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You have recently noticed that your computer is getting too slow and out-of-date. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:- - explain the problems with your computer - give some examples of how this has affected your work - make some suggestions for what can be done to help address this issue.

#computer #manager #work #suggestions #address
Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing
this
 letter to draw your attention to the issues regarding
slow
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 speed of my computer
system
 along with
it's
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 expired operating
system
. At the onset, many problems have been faced by me out of which the hanging issue is the top most. As the requirement of our company's Finacle software is 6 Gb RAM, the RAM of my
system
 is just 2 Gb so it is too slow to work smoothly.
In addition
, the activation of
installed
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 Windows 10 operating
system
 has been expired
last
 month.
Hence
, limited audio options,
system
 memory low warnings on display and too
much
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slow speed of Finacle software are the problems
are
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 deteriorating my work badly.
Therefore
, it is requested that kindly upgrade the RAM of my computer
system
 from
upto
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up to
 6 Gb at least so that our official software will work effectively.
Moreover
, if the technical branch of our department has an
authetic
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authentic
 activation key for my
system
,
then
 please instruct them to update my computer's operating
system
 which can make me able to use
full
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 functions of the
system
. I hope you would consider the genuinity of my situation to resolve the issues at
earliest
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. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Harry Brown
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