In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside this vehicle will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to the rapid improvement of technology,
people
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can predict all
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will become
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in the future. Some
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support
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that driverless vehicle
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driverless
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vehicles
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have more positive impacts
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, whereas others argue that there are more drawbacks
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this
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issue. In
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essay, I will briefly explain
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both
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of use and give my own opinion.
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of all, safety is the main benefit of
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vehicles
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. Clearly, there are many
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accidents are caused by
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.
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, drowsy driving and
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the drunk
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driver.
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, with the
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car
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,
people
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can avoid driving
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when
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they have bad body
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conditions
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.
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,
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the computer
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computer
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computers
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can react faster than
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humans
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when
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situation
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car
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because
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do
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not have
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, so
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just
follow
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the process and
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the instruction.
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, without driving,
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can save more time during the journey.
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, if employees have a
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car
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, they can prepare some documents or even do some online
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before they arrive
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destination.
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,
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a human
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can focus on
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apply
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task which is more complex.
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, there
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some negative
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effects
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.
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,
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driverless
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vehicles
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may exacerbate
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situation, especially in
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industry.
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, the public
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in modern innovation.
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nowadays trust
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more than AI.
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, high technology devices usually
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accidentally. To sum up, it seems that there are still some drawbacks of
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vehicles
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,
however
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, the advantages and functions are more beneficial to
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humans
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.
Although
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some
people
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need more time to
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adopt
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new
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to new
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innovation
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innovations
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, it will be a trend in the future.
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