In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that in various nations obesity and

health

issues are very common in

children

and it is the duty of the

government

to resolve

this

problem. I firmly believe

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that

this

matter can be sorted out if the governing bodies take

necessary

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measures.

To begin

with, it is widely seen nowadays, that many youngsters are becoming overweight and are suffering from many

health related

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problems

such

as diabetes and

anemia

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. One of the main reasons responsible for

this

is

consumption

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the consumption

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of junk and processed

food

.

However

,

authorties

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authorities

can take certain measures

such

as imposing more tax on unhealthy eateries. One of the best

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of

this

can be seen in the USA where

government

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has raised the taxes on

the

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junk

food

which has

consequently

led to a sharp decline in the number of consumers

specially

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younger

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the younger

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age group.

Therefore

, in

this

way governing bodies can limit

consumption

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of unhealthy

food

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children

. Another step which authorities can take, so, that

this

problem can be mitigated is

health

awareness programmes.

Health

workers can be employed by the

government

to carry out

such

programmes

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benefitof

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benefit of

the youth.

For instance

, in India pertaining to

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rise

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in obesity and

health

issues in the younger age group, the governing bodies have employed many

health

workers who visit schools and colleges and motivate

children

to opt for

healthy

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diet. Henceforth, by

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initiative

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this

problem can be easily addressed. To conclude, unhealthy lifestyle and eating

habbits

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habits

are very much prevalent in

children

nowadays and these are responsible for many

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problems.

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Nevertheless

, if the

government

takes essential steps

this

issue can be solved by implementing more taxes on unhealthy

food

and motivating

younger

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the younger

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age

group

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to consume healthy for a better life.