Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. The governments have taken some measures at a global level. But they got only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this be solved?

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days, a scientist and

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, factories and vehicles emit a large number of toxic gases into the air

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time to decay.

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is one of the most devastating

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these companies that did not follow the laws and did not throw away their wastage properly.

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surroundings air that we exhale. Individuals should stop using plastic products rather they should use recycled materials. In summary, a lot of

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in time if not our planet will be disappeared within a few decades.

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