Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. The governments have taken some measures at a global level. But they got only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this be solved?

In these
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days, a scientist and
expert
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are concerned about environmental problems
such
as air pollution and climate
changes
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because of
human's
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actions
. These are the main effects of causing natural
distaters
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disasters
disaster
and I am going to discuss some solutions in the following paragraphs. There are
some
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myriad reasons behind
such
a scenario.
Firstly
, factories and vehicles emit a large number of toxic gases into the air
as a result
these cause global warming. Due to the emission of greenhouse gases, the world
are
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becoming warmer
and
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can lead to the
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of animal species.
For instance
, many people suffer health issues like asthma and heart attack around the globe
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every year.
Moreover
, people do not
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properly the wastes from factories and
then
these wastes take
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time to decay.
Consequently
, these are seriously influenced
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the weather situation
such
as
flood
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floods
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and volcano eruptions. To illustrate,
tsunami
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is one of the most devastating
phenomenon
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that killed around 230,000
people's lives
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in Japan. On contrary, it should be responsible for both individual and
government 's
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actions
.
Firstly
, the government should
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fined
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these companies that did not follow the laws and did not throw away their wastage properly.
Secondly
, the authority should encourage their citizen to plant more trees because trees absorb
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
and clean
our
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surroundings air that we exhale. Individuals should stop using plastic products rather they should use recycled materials. In summary, a lot of
meteological
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meteorological
neurological
cases are caused by
mankind
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actions
. Despite the fact that it should be important to prevent these
actions
in time if not our planet will be disappeared within a few decades.
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