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Some educationist think that international exchange visit will benefit teenagers at school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Research has shown that international
exchange
 programs will benefit juveniles at school. Even though I do not have an opportunity to go
exchange
 but I firmly believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reason. On the one hand, it is apparent that
exchange
 sessions make
students
be
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a global citizens
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a global citizen
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.
For example
,
Students
 can
exchange
 different cultures.
For example
, Thai
students
 who
exchange
 in France can confident in the democratic mechanism system. Thai
students
 can contrast why France is successful in democratic ways and does not have a lot of coup
de'tat
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de tat
detail
. It is related to a democratic philosophy that make crystal clear in French Revolution.
Moreover
, Thai
exchange
students
 will discover new food, language, and art that be a part of French culture
that is
 well-known over the globe.
On the other hand
,
Exchange
students
 will be far from family and country.
However
, They can transform a crisis into an opportunity to learn and to stay alone in a different place if
students
 are able to surpass it.
For example
, They will speak more than one language or They will have more responsible from the past.
Nonetheless
, the main negative aspect is the cost of those
exchange
 visits, countless families are unable to afford the price. In conclusion, I firmly support
students
 in
the
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secondary school who have funding let apply for an
exchange
 student. I firmly believe
this
 occasion will gain a lot of experience to
exchange
students
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationists
  • international exchange visit
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • cultural exchange
  • exposure
  • language skills
  • worldview
  • global awareness
  • empathy
  • tolerance
  • academic growth
  • career opportunities
  • homesickness
  • adjustment issues
  • safety concerns
  • financial burden
  • impact
  • academic performance
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