Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?

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Experts believe that the general public does not live fully feeling that they do not control the way they exist. In
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essay, I will explore the causes which can be brought by
this
trend and explore how
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could be improved.
Firstly
, I will describe why
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can be harmful
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the birth rate in the county and
secondly
, I will share the idea of depression which takes place in our lives today.
To begin
with, those who are not satisfied with their lifestyle and there is no sense what reasons they have for
this
can not be good oriented in the society.
In addition
, they will never be able to create their own family and have children
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because
it is almost impossible for someone to be responsible for someone, while, he can not even control his own life. One possible solution for
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could be
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of
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opportunities for citizens by the government to
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help
them better reveal their potential
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because
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my opinion,
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is the
first
reason why human beings do not have purposes and a lack
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sufficient control.
As a result
, the majority of humans will try themselves in new fields and maybe, take
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responsibility for their existence. Another good decision for these individuals
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turn to psychologists who will probably help them.
Moreover
, depression is a huge problem the young generation has faced
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and sometimes it is impossible to deal with it without the help of a professional and a person can make suicide.
Consequently
, without a doubt, it is absolutely important to get rid of depression nowadays.
Otherwise
, a person can stay depressed for the rest of his life. In conclusion, from the facts I have given
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we can see that there are many negatives associated with
this
trend and in my own opinion, it must be solved as fast as possible or it will cause many difficulties for us in the future.
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