Some people believe that the experience children have before the go to school will have a greatest effect on their future life. Other argue that experience gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

While certain individuals believe a brighter future for youngsters is attributed to the practical knowledge they acquired before enrolling on the academy, others are of opinion that experience has a great effect when gain during adolescence age.

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essay will examine both views and in my own opinion, undergoing certain events before academy life is the best. On the one hand, experience encountered before attending school has a better effect on children in their later lives because their brain is still fresh,

hence

making the acquisition of knowledge to be easy for them.

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skill acquired would be useful to them in tackling any challenges that come their way when they later enrolled on an

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institution.

For instance

, a child that has been playing games that require critical thinking will find it easy to deal with some subjects

such

as mathematics in school.

On the other hand

, there is a greater influence

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achieving a successful life in the subsequent life when receiving experiences as a teenager.

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the individual is now getting mature and will be able to differentiate to some extent between bad and good experiences.

Furthermore

, the knowledge or skill been gained will be put into practice immediately to achieve the goal.

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, an individual that has undergone an argumentative presentation when in school will be able to defend a project excellently when he/she starts working. As far as I'm concerned, I believe the experience a child receives before starting schooling will help to broaden their horizon, they will be able to build on it when they grow up and

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will lead to

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a better prospective year

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years. In conclusion, while some people believe undergoing adventure during teenager has a great influence on success in future , I'm in support of those that opined to gain it before attending an academic institution.