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Many people agree that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?

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Most developed countries always have public
transport
.
Moreover
, many
people
 agree that free public
transportation
 should be available in most major cities. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
 notion even in society has a lot of criticisms.
Accordingly
, I will explain in the following paragraph. On the one hand, Free public
transportation
 will make more duties to the government because it spends a lot of financial
budget
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. It brings all responsibilities
such
 as managing a schedule in
transportation
, and frequently time periods that passengers no longer wait.
On the other hand
, Free public
transportation
 will make benefit to metropolitan. Downtown, where public
transport
 failed to support citizens' lifestyles, can illustrate that the government have mistaken. An issue of free
transportation
,
Firstly
, It reduces
people
 living costs because the globe today
is
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 confronted with an inflation crisis. To reduce expenses free public
transport
 can help excellent ,especially for poor
people
.
Secondly
, It invites citizens to limit the use of personal cars.
Then
, It will benefit the environment because the carbon footprint downtown will significantly decrease.
Moreover
, I have an example in Luxembourg that successful in the free public
transport
 projects since 2016. I have seen that for began
this
 option. Citizens should have money enough to pay a higher amount of taxes. In my opinion, If the project can be the possible government should collect revenue for the state in other options. In conclusion, I firmly support
this
 project because it not only have benefit
people
 but
also
 the environment.
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