You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

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Dear

Mr.

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John, I am Mechanical Engineer from

Relinace

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Reliance

industries in India and writing to inquire about seminar which will be held in

year

second

quarter in

USA

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. I have been nominated

from

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my company to attend seminar since it is on

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of my area of

experties

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. The several approvals and formalities

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be completed prior to

end

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this

year in order to appear for

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seminar. I would like to know about

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dates so

accordingly

flight booking and other arrangements can be done. It would be

great

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detailed

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program can be shared now with the participants.

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, it is requested to provide

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quotation for financial approval from the company. It is suggested to share

accomodation

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accommodation

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has arranged for participants. I have some relatives in America so accommodation can be planned at their home. I am looking forward

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your response and necessary details. Yours faithfully, Raja Bhaiya

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