You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear
Mr.
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John, I am Mechanical Engineer from
Relinace
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Reliance
industries in India and writing to inquire about seminar which will be held in
next
year
second
quarter in
USA
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. I have been nominated
from
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my company to attend seminar since it is on
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of my area of
experties
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expertise
. The several approvals and formalities
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be completed prior to
end
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of
this
year in order to appear for
this
seminar. I would like to know about
exact
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dates so
accordingly
flight booking and other arrangements can be done. It would be
great
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help if
detailed
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program can be shared now with the participants.
Moreover
, it is requested to provide
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budgetary
budgetory
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quotation for financial approval from the company. It is suggested to share
accomodation
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accommodation
detail if
organiser
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has arranged for participants. I have some relatives in America so accommodation can be planned at their home. I am looking forward
for
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your response and necessary details. Yours faithfully, Raja Bhaiya
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