Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that
children
should begin formal schooling at an early Use synonyms
age
, while others believe it should begin when they are seven or older. Use synonyms
This
essay will examine both sides of the debate and present evidence for why it is critical Linking Words
to begin
learning at a young Linking Words
age
.
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To begin
with, it is clear that pre-schools provide their kindergarten Linking Words
students
with access to more basic academic and life Use synonyms
skills
earlier than those seven-year-old or older Use synonyms
students
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, because of the soft Linking Words
skills
that were taught earlier, young learners are able to behave well in society. It is Use synonyms
therefore
agreed that starting to learn at a young Linking Words
age
is a very worthwhile move for young Use synonyms
children
in order to pursue higher education in the future. Use synonyms
For instance
, most Thai Linking Words
students
start their education at around 3 to 4 years old, so they will be capable of essential literacy Use synonyms
skills
, basic knowledge of the alphabet, mathematical Use synonyms
skills
, and various other Use synonyms
skills
quickly and easily.
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On the other hand
, many think that Linking Words
children
should start to learn at an earlier Use synonyms
age
than seven. Perhaps Use synonyms
this
is because Linking Words
children
may have plenty of time to spend with their parents Use synonyms
first
so that they can make their relationship bond stronger. Another reason is that perhaps Linking Words
children
may not be ready physically and mentally, and that could harm society in general. Use synonyms
Students
with disabilities, Use synonyms
for example
, may get bullied by other peers, and that makes it even harder for them to live and study in peace like other Linking Words
students
.
In conclusion, some people believe that Use synonyms
children
should begin formal schooling at an early Use synonyms
age
, while others believe it should begin when they are older. From my point of view, Use synonyms
however
, I think that Linking Words
children
need to start school at an early Use synonyms
age
so that they can prepare themselves for a fast-changing world in order to become more effective people from a very young Use synonyms
age
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