Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that
children
should begin formal schooling at an early age
, while others believe it should begin when they are seven or older. This
essay will examine both sides of the debate and present evidence for why it is critical to begin
learning at a young age
.
To begin
with, it is clear that pre-schools provide their kindergarten students
with access to more basic academic and life skills
earlier than those seven-year-old or older students
. Furthermore
, because of the soft skills
that were taught earlier, young learners are able to behave well in society. It is therefore
agreed that starting to learn at a young age
is a very worthwhile move for young children
in order to pursue higher education in the future. For instance
, most Thai students
start their education at around 3 to 4 years old, so they will be capable of essential literacy skills
, basic knowledge of the alphabet, mathematical skills
, and various other skills
quickly and easily.
On the other hand
, many think that children
should start to learn at an earlier age
than seven. Perhaps this
is because children
may have plenty of time to spend with their parents first
so that they can make their relationship bond stronger. Another reason is that perhaps children
may not be ready physically and mentally, and that could harm society in general. Students
with disabilities, for example
, may get bullied by other peers, and that makes it even harder for them to live and study in peace like other students
.
In conclusion, some people believe that children
should begin formal schooling at an early age
, while others believe it should begin when they are older. From my point of view, however
, I think that children
need to start school at an early age
so that they can prepare themselves for a fast-changing world in order to become more effective people from a very young age
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