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Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are wrong. Get ready to talk to an examiner about this issue.

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Some
people
 are in the opinion that when they visit others at a glance and give sens about
this
 moment,
This
initially
 effect is generally right. But, other
people
 oppose
this
 view and opine that human beings must not make the decision about other peoples' personalities
first
 when they meet them because it might be wrong insomnia about others' characteristics. Like many other debatable ,issues both views have their own rational reasoning. On the
one
 hand,
people
 really admire and appreciate their feelings about everything that may happen in the surrounded world.
Hence
 when they meet someone and get bad feelings in the
first
 step, They reach the conclusion that their impressions about that person would not change anyway.
For instance
, whenever they visit someone who is mad and somehow rude at that exact time they believe that he or she is a rude person who can not control him or herself in the different situations and he or she annoys anyone that communicates with him or her. Apart from
this
, other more rational
people
 claim that we should not make a decision about others just after
one
 meeting. Because our emotions are not true always and it is an unfair judgment to talk about peoples' attributes when we face them for the
first
 time.
Furthermore
, they claim that human beings are known for their total treatment not just as
one
 of their behaviour at particular times. In my honest point of view, I strongly agree with the
second
 group who state that we should talk about someone's personality by considering whole behaviours which may happen to them, not a specific
one
 in a special moment. Because
people
's characteristic framework is included both bad and good treatments and habits that they may do.
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