Nowadays, the ultimate goal of science should be to enhance human lives. I completely agree with
assertion because of medical, technological and environmental benefits.
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medicine and technologies have
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unprecedented results thanks to scientific research. Indeed, scientists are more likely to manage to cure terminal illnesses,
as cancer based on edge-cut technologies and they could achieve to eradicate dangerous diseases from the surface of the earth, resulting in analysing more deeply about human health and living conditions.
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Apart from health improvements, technological advancements alleviate the daily burdens of people. More
, gadgets and electronic appliances help to free up people's time and energy as they do not require whole attention.
, vacuum cleaners can clean not only carpets or furniture
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but air
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. Interestingly, the majority of scientific research
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conducted to address environmental problems,
as climate change, resource depletion, and pollution that directly impact the well-being of current and future generations.
, through improving the quality of air, water and soil, modern science can
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human lifespans,
rescue rare species which are on the verge of extinction.
In conclusion,
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benefits.