The number of indigenous tribes living traditional lives in the world’s rainforests is decreasing. Within a few decades the last of these indigenous tribes may have disappeared forever. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?
The aboriginal
tribes
living in the world’s tropical Use synonyms
rainforests
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population is
descending. Not more than a few decades, the rest of Verb problem
are
native
Correct article usage
the native
tribes
may have forever evanesced. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss one of the main problems associated with indigenous groups living in Linking Words
rainforests
decreasing number nowadays and suggest a viable solution.
The principal problem with the possibility of primeval Use synonyms
tribes
living in Use synonyms
rainforests
disappearance in a few decades is deforestation. People, especially Use synonyms
businessperson
often exploit nature for their own Fix the agreement mistake
businesspeople
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businesses
purposes by felling rare Change the noun form
business
trees
in important areas, rather than replanting to save the minors and the world. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
issue Linking Words
affects
the number of Verb problem
causes
many
local Correct word choice
apply
tribes
in Use synonyms
rainforests
to lessen and Use synonyms
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finally
may disappear sooner or later within ten years. Rephrase
apply
For example
, wood companies need to cut down Linking Words
trees
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for constructing
buildings to receive high profits.
A possible solution to Change preposition
to construct
this
worrying problem is imposing Linking Words
regulations
and laws in order to govern Use synonyms
trees
felling from Use synonyms
businesses
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, by using Linking Words
the
government Correct article usage
apply
regulations
, the current scenario may have Use synonyms
alleviated
. Add a missing verb
been alleviated
For instance
, wood Linking Words
businesses
may become afraid of laws and Use synonyms
regulations
, Use synonyms
then
perhaps they would not try to log Linking Words
trees
to risk their Use synonyms
businesses
so that those indigenous people in Use synonyms
rainforests
can still be living.
In summary, one of the main problems with the world's jungles is that the number of indigenous Use synonyms
tribes
practicing traditional lives is dwindling by deforestation and Use synonyms
this
can be solved by imposing laws and Linking Words
regulations
. It is predicted that more and more entrepreneurs will chop down Use synonyms
trees
but they may Use synonyms
finally
be penalized by the government.Linking Words
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