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people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience.do you think public speaking skill is really important?should students be taught public speaking at school?

#people #presentation #audience #skill #students #school
Today, people who seem to have
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 ability to carry out presentations eloquently in public gain popularity not just because of the
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 which they present but because
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 difficult for a
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 to do presentations.
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 in schools. As the systems of the world continue to evolve the need to equip
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a student
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 with all the tools they need to perform at the highest level becomes more and more paramount. Interestingly, that old fashion style of teaching students to understand concepts and be analytical has not been enough to meet the demands of the job market as those who are able to present their ideas are readily accepted. Again, how might anyone without public speaking skills be given the opportunity over the person who has
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, public speaking should be taught as it will help
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 develop their
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 which is very important in overcoming challenging
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 and solving problems.
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