You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

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Patel, Greetings! As I have promised to write to you about my travel experience which was recommended by you, the overall experience was fabulous. About my experience till today, I have enjoyed
this
trip to the fullest because my needs have been fulfilled here. The hotel you had booked for me, they were provided
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pick-up facility from the airport, the accommodation facility was perfect and the meal was delicious. I have visited the temples, and zoo, and tried the traditional food in a local restaurant. I am going to the local market for the shopping, as it is known for the traditional clothes, handicrafts, and
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footwear items, and I bought a few clothes from the local store. I must say that the local people of Rajasthan are so friendly and helpful. Before the end of the journey, I am planning to visit the City Palace Museum which is filled with facts, articles, and historical information. Once again thank you for suggesting me
such
a great place. Yours sincerely, K. R. Dave
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