your local newspaper is holding a competition to find a person who has done the most to help the local community. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. in your letter name and describe the person you think should win say how you know this person explain how this person has helped the local community

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about the most

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person competition you are holding. The community and I think that Paul Young is the most qualified one for

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position. I met

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person four years ago, we had a conversation at The Gar bar

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we were talking about what actions should be taken to mitigate poverty, so that human beings can have the important

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that they deserve. Paul Young has done many activities for poor people in our society, he is arranging the largest donating festivals every six months, whish is called Do It , many of the poorer families comes and gets the basic needs,

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as food and clothes, and they really appreciate

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effort, old people

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strongly love him and call him our pauly because he always takes their complains into his consideration. Thank you for your consideration. Best regards, Lamar

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Jul 29, 2025

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Make sure to have a clear introduction stating the purpose of your letter.

coherence

Try to use connecting words to help your ideas flow better from one to another.

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You have a warm tone in your letter, which makes it friendly.

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Your support for Paul Young is clear, showing his good work in the community.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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