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A magzine wants to include contributions from its readers for an arcticle called 'the book that influenced me most' write a letter to the editor of the magzine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about. -explain how this book influenced you. -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people. write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have been an ardent reader of your weekly columns in 'The Washington Post'. I look forward to your articles every Sunday and have been following
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since
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 a very long time. I am writing
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 to give my contribution
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 the article 'the
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 that influenced me
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, as requested in 'The Washington Post' from its readers. 'Revolution 2020' by 'Charlie Seth' is one
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book
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 that has influenced me in many ways.
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book
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 has laid down the foundations of our
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 system and precisely explains how flawed and outdated our
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 system is. Let me explain how
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book
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 has influenced me. After reading
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book
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, I realized the years and money,
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 and my parents have spent on my
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 in
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 country, and yet it takes so many years for us to recover
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half the amount spent on our
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.
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 that precious time and money really worth spending
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, when you can spend just 10
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 of that money on learning some crucial skills online? I gave up on my plan of doing a
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 degree after reading
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book
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. I believe
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book
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 will definitely influence other people as well
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 since it clearly showcases how we can educate ourselves independently. It'd be really great if you could briefly mention
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this
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book
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 in your article, which would eventually call for reforms in our
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 system. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Jay
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