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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Many
people
 believe that the motives for acquiring other
languages
 despite
of
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mother
language
 should be for enhancing jobs from abroad nations or going vacations to foreign countries.
On the other hand
, some individuals claim that there might be other arguments to learn a foreign
language
. From my point of view, I
also
 agree with
second
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 statement as
people
 tend to study foreign
languages
 not only for chasing jobs and going trips but
also
 for developing themselves as a skill of human beings. It could be denied that knowing
mother
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language
 of the country where ones have to work is one of the fundamental skills for occupation.
This
 would help a lot in migrated workers’ communication with team members and labouring processes.
As a result
, it could create comfortable workplaces for guest workers. In terms of
traveling
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, understanding the national
language
 of the desired country to visit would give full quintessence of a trip.The traveller knows all the signs and signals which are written in
it’s
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 mother
language
, so he/she could go around the place like his/her motherland.
Although
 being multilingual helps a lot in aspects of working and
traveling
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, those are not the only reasons to learn a foreign
language
.Some
people
 study different
languages
 just for motivating themselves and their brains’ health.Acquiring various
languages
 makes
people
’s brains to be more active and
also
enhance
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 memorizing skills.
For instance
,
people
 who can communicate
with
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in
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 more than one
language
 have less risk for
Alzehimer’s
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Alzheimer's
 disease and dementia when they get older. Some
people
also
 study other
languages
 because of being
a
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 international
fan
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fans
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. They want to get
contact
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in contact
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 with their admired actors and singers
with
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in
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 the same
language
 which could
makes
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 their connections to be stronger. In conclusion, being a multilingual person has a lot of benefits for our lives.
Therefore
,
causes
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 for learning new
languages
 should not be limited. We can use our cognitive skills for any
fields
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field
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 that we want to apply and
this
 will make us
to
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be knowledgeable persons.
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