You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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Dear Dimpy It has been a long time since we met so let’s plan to catch up soon. I recently attended a book exhibition that I think could be a perfect opportunity for us to meet and spend a good time.

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is an international book exhibition that has

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from authors around the globe and has sections for many different genres. As you are fascinated by

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since childhood, I think you will love

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event. They have a huge section specifically for science and fiction enthusiasts like you. On weekends they host a writer’s event where people can interact with well-known writers and every evening they have a play based on various

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which are quite fun to attend. Let me know when you are free

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week so we can go together to explore some

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just like the old times. After the exhibition, we can go and have dinner at our favourite place followed by the latest Marvel movie. See you soon! Yours sincerely Hannah

hansa.pandit11Sun Jun 12 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

Some people say that ebooks and modern technology will replace traditional newspaper and magazine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outwigh the disadvantages?