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6. Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

#people #school #studies #requirements #success
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In the modern world, within the current 21st-century scholars tends to finish
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their learning institution much younger than in the past
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 at an older life. They as lots of important in leaving
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 young sure as early promotion, long working year's, improves smartness, acknowledgement by others both at workplaces and in the society.
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 it is believed that children learn more and faster in their early life . When a child is introduced to academic activities and
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 being engaged in education before the maturity of 3yrs.
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 enables them to
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 very young.
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20 to 21
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 old, making them venture into their different carrier at a very young and will become successful before 30years. In a condition when an individual finishes
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 at of 25 to 30 ,
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 late success or won't have a great achievement before 50
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 order contribution to early success is the smartness and intelligence development of the pupil's brain. When a child has a high
IQ
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 which makes them successful at a younger
age
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 high
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 makes education faster and easy, and they by graduating from
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 at a very young
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. The studies that were carried out by Thomas
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 at which people
graduate
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 from
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 in 2013. The result shows that many successful individuals in the world have a high
IQ
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 made them
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 earlier from
school
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. Many people with low
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 don't
graduate
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 from
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 with outstanding results
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 making them less successful in life. In , the conclusion is based on the discussion on the reason why early graduation students are more successful than those who graduated late in
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 is only based on early education and exposure to academic institutions and the child's smartness, which is based on
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. Other things that make one successful are continuous work and practice.

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