The Government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatment facility in order to protect the environment .To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is an undeniable fact that these days, the whole world is facing the problem of global warming and pollution owing to the unnecessary litter things produced by various factories.Some people believe that the regime ought to shut down those industries which do not have the right measurement to recycle these materials .I partially agree with

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will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, It is a matter of grave concern because several gasses like nitrous oxide,carbon dioxide and methane are produced by companies while making products which are not good for living creatures.

Moreover

, the smoke released from factories

create

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air pollution in nature .

As a result

, individuals face the problem of Asthma.

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, according to an article published in "The Tribune" in 2021, thirty per cent of the world population are suffering from lung disease due to

this

excessive air pollution. On the flip side, closing these companies are not the solution to curb

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havoc since many workers' livelihood

depend

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on these enterprises.The Government

impose

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the

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hafty

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hefty

safety

penalty on those ventures which have not recycled the waste material

instead

of closing

those business

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that business

those businesses

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.

Secondly

, the ministry would be started to reward

those business

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that business

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which help to save the environment .

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, in

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year 2018 many nations have started the policy to give the relaxation in taxes to those organizations which play

vital

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role to resolve

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issue. In conclusion, many species facing the problem because of

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harmful junk dumb from firms.

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of terminating these

companies

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the government must implement stringent rules to encourage for re-utilize

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those dreadful stuff

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into

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useful

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manner.