In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read ebooks rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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In conclusion, ebooks have many advantages for reading in the recent day but there are some negative points to be aware of using smart devices too frequently.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite