In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read ebooks rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Advanced technology develops reading methods from
paper
to online platforms. People
would tend to read ebooks more than paper
. I would agree that there are great advantages of paperless reading compared to books
made by
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with
paper
, but drawbacks would be occurred
. The essay will be explained why reading online Change to the active voice
occur
have occurred
books
are much advantageous and some negative points still are found.
Online books
provide enormous benefits in many ways. Especially, it reduces the deforestation to use for paper
industries. Therefore
, when trees have the opportunity to grow, they generate Oxygen for any kind of animal. In addition
, The world temperature would decrease because of the growth of forests. Another benefit is that reading on online platforms such
as apple and android apps make people
easier to just carry a smartphone or a tablet for reading many books
. On the contrary
, when readers would like to read several books
when travelling, they have to use more space to pick them up and get heavier than ebooks.
However
. there are some disadvantages of using paperless books
. Firstly
, the light of devices would damage their eyes when the readers spend much time on
looking at their smartphones. It reduces the visible quality ,especially in young Change preposition
apply
people
. Some reading lovers argue that people
can feel relaxed and reduce pressure because of the book covers. The authors design their books
friendly for readers.
In conclusion, ebooks have many advantages for reading in the recent day but there are some negative points to be aware of using smart devices too frequently.Submitted by deksuan132 on
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