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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweight the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The usage of nuclear
energy
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 and depending on it to have a cost-effective way of
energy
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 and
world
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peace
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 has always been a dispute. I completely disagree with relying on nuclear
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 and
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 essay will elaborate more on my disagreement.
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, nuclear
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 is more dangerous than one could imagine.
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 the benefits are more, the consequence of nuclear explosives is high.
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, the research itself can be harmful to humans life who are regularly working on nuclear projects.
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, even a small mistake in the entire research or storage system can lead to great threats. Many countries use nuclear
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 as a weapon
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 of using it for
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peace
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.
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, a nuclear explosion which happened in Hiroshima vanished the whole city including many lives and plants.
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, the amount of money required to support nuclear
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 is huge compared to other
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 which brings
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 to the
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. There are so many alternative renewable
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 as wind, fire, coal etc.Money can be invested in them.
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, promoting green
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 leads to
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peace
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 by reducing global warming.
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, the power generated from a nuclear reaction costs less than hydroelectric or oil-generated electricity.
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, it's cleaner and maintains the air pollution-free.
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, the Russians are at the top in utilising nuclear resources for the betterment of mankind. In conclusion,weighing up the disadvantages again, I strongly believe the advantages of nuclear
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 can be achieved by natural resources
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 as the sun or wind and the same will helps to accomplish
world
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peace
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.
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