Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

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Crimes
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are usually categorized as being unlawful and
lately
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crime
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rates have been massively increasing around the globe. While there are some of us who believe that there has to be a fixed prosecution for each type of
crime
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committed. Others, feel that motivation for committing the
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should always
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taken into account while deciding the punishment for an individual
crime
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. In my opinion, both these views are presented with the thought of well-being and
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they should be discussed to gain a proper understanding as some statements do convince me for particular reasons.
Firstly
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, the
law
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works quote strictly and fairly because
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system has been developing for centuries. Each loophole is taken under consideration and lawful bodies find ways to fix
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by acknowledging the flaws. Most of the time, corruption is treated fairly under the lawful eyes of the jurisdiction system. From thieves , robbers, murderers and betrayers, all are brought under the
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and are prosecuted for their
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. For an instance, there are new laws enforced in Vietnam to ban drinking and driving because drunk drivers mainly cause car accidents. According to that Driver's license will be revoked for a period of 10 to 12 months and they will be fined a fixed amount which is enough to make them realize their mistakes. Now, not all forms
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crimes
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can be intended as gruesome. Some
crimes
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can be innocent too and they can be rectified by minute punishment and most of the
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educating the defaulter. Let us assume for an instance, a
14 year old
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teenager
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picks
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pick pockets
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pickpockets
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a candy from the provision store and gets caught by the security through their CCTV footage.
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pick pocketing
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pick-pocketing
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is a
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, it cannot be compared to the likes of a hit and run or even
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gruesome murder. Yet there were many precedents in the Vietnamese
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that pushed an adolescent to jail for three years because of bread stealing .
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, the critical point is that
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must be given to an appropriate holder. In conclusion,
crimes
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have fixed sentences under the
law
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.
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, it has shown many faulty evaluations under many contexts, and I believe the solution is to put the power to a fair judgement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrent
  • Judicial process
  • Deliberating
  • Consistent
  • Humane
  • Intent
  • Background
  • Personal circumstances
  • Severity
  • Rehabilitation
  • Sentencing
  • Recidivism
  • Public perception
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