TASK 2: The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social problems. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the influence of detailed descriptions of perpetrators on individuals and social issues. Some people argue that the media should be tightly regulated. From my perspective, I partially agree with
this
idea to some certain extent.
Without a shadow of a doubt, detailed information
about offenders may bring conducive impacts on people’s awareness. A comprehensive explanation of the offense
will heighten the perception of Change the spelling
offence
misbehavior
or breaking the law, as well as inform residents of the consequences of that wicked act. Change the spelling
misbehaviour
For example
in Vietnam, the daily news on television frequently provides information
about delinquents, including videos about how they commit crimes
and the punishments they get for their actions so that people are aware of the crimes
and do not commit them, thereby reducing the crime rate. Therefore
, the detailed description of crimes
does wonders for increasing people’s consciousness.
While the redeeming features of revealing the detailed description of law-breakers are widely acknowledged, its drawbacks still linger. Revealing information
about offenders will have a negative impact on both their families and themselves. For instance
, when a criminal's information
about their family is disclosed, their relatives may suffer from hateful and vicious comments despite the fact that they are blameless persons. And when the perpetrators finish their sentence, they may be boycotted by the information
that has spread all over the social networks about their crimes
, leaving them with no way to reintegration into society. Hence
, this
brings adverse effects for the delinquents related to the case and their families.
In conclusion, although
the precise depiction of crimes
provides numerous benefits to people, the media should be controlled in order to avoid harming relatives and offenders.Submitted by hominhtrang995 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite