Many people think that the professional sportsmen/sportswomen's behaviors on field and off fields are not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some individuals feel that professional

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people

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can behave as they please on or off the fields as long they are decent players. In

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essay, I will share my own opinion if I agree or disagree with

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statement. On the one hand, letting these

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as they want could have serious damage to their image as a player.

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, if they chose to treat everyone with respect rather than be disrespectful, it could be very beneficial for their career and show the fans they care for others.

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, when the famous tennis player Novak Jokovic chose not to congratulate the winner who won the match he played in, it had a negative impact on his famous and personal image.

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, some

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felt that he was an entitled human being,which

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led to where a lot of viewers did not focus on how good or bad Novak played that game.

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, individuals that spend their time playing

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and are famous for doing so, have a lot of children watching them. So if they were to choose to treat

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bad on or off the field, it could influence these kids and show them that it is okay to behave a certain way towards some

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, when I grew up, I always watched Zlatan Ibrahimovic who is a famous soccer player. He would always

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a bit like a diva in front of the cameras, but off-camera, he always treated other players and fans with respect.

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has led to a lot of the younger viewers watching back

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, has proceeded to train in soccer or another sport since

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had a positive impact on them growing up. In conclusion, there are some folks that feel that females and males that are playing different

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can

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like they please on or off the fields, but there will

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have a large impact on the

people

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that are viewing them. In saying

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, I feel that I agree with the essay written above

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since it is important that these players

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in a good manner and treat everyone around them decently.

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, I do not agree with the statement written above.

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