Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that
people
are suffering from numerous health-related issues due to the excessive consumption of unhealthy food. Some people
hold the thought that education
is an applicable solution, while others have little faith in this
scheme. This
essay will illustrate both of
views and my opinion in Change preposition
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favor
of Change the spelling
favour
latter
.
It is generally argued, by some, Correct article usage
the latter
training
and Correct word choice
that training
rising
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raising
people
awareness is the most effective way. Change noun form
people's
Firstly
, harmful
impacts of junk food on body health are known through Correct article usage
the harmful
education
. For example
, creating various illness
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illnesses
such
as chronic diseases which are caused by consuming these kinds of foods
. Secondly
, achieve to a healthy diet program is gained via training. For instance
, reach
a suitable plan for amounts of nutritious Wrong verb form
reaching
foods
leads to get
enough vitamins, proteins and etc. Wrong verb form
getting
as a result
, decreases
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decreasing
tendency
to unhealthy Add an article
the tendency
foods
.
In spite of the above arguments, I agree with those who argue that education
will not work. This
method is necessary,
but isn’t enough because other conditions Remove the comma
apply
such
as job situation
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situations
effect
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affect
on
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apply
this
way. For example
, when somebody works more than 8 hours per day, he doesn’t have sufficient time to follow training. Furthermore
, education
doesn’t have power
that avoids Correct article usage
the power
people
consumption of junk Change noun form
people's
foods
. In other words
, self-commitment has a vital role in avoiding eating junk foods
in compare
to Replace the word
comparison
education
.
To sum up, health
of individuals is Add an article
the health
injuring
by eating unhealthy Wrong verb form
injured
foods
. In my opinion, using of
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people
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people's
education
method
doesn’t have enough power in order to overcome Fix the agreement mistake
methods
this
issue.Submitted by Masud on
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