Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as a unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

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It is not simple for
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to predict a consequence of any
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, but they can choose
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attitude
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toward
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facing those issues.Some
people
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support that accepting a bad
situation
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is the best option, whereas others argue that continuing
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themselve
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themselves
to achieve their goal is better. In
this
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essay, I will briefly explain to both sides of you and give my own opinion.
First
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of all, the
people
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who choose to receive
those bad
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that bad situation
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situation
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is better than the
people
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who choose to give up.
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, they may have other preferred problems
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that need
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to be solved
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as financial
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problems
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.
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, they have to earn more money
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the job they select is
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enough.
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, the
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who can undergo adversity make them stronger. If they can accept the challenges in their life, their ability can be enhanced because failure is a nutrient of success.
On the other hand
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, some
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will keep improving their capability to get their
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ambitions
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because they can not ignore their
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failures
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until they reach their
goal
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goals
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.
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, they will motivate themselves not to give up and put more effort
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it.
For example
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, JK Rowling, the author of Harry Potter,
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rejected many
time
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times
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by the
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company,
however
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, she keep rewriting and fixing the content.
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, she became a
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world-famous
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world famous
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author. To sum up, it is hard to judge
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the
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attitude of
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a person
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during
different
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the different
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situation
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situations
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. From where I stand, I think
people
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should learn both
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of attitude when they face
to
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different
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problem
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problems
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. The most significant thing is
that
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apply
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comprehending the detail of
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situation
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the situation
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and finding
a
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the
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best method to
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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