Some say thatr advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Presently, people's needs and requirements have been enhanced enormously compared to the past.
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, advertisement is the key factor which humans are encouraged to buy manufacturers in
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market. As long as some of them believe advertisement is the best way to
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their material to customers even though others declared that nowadays , these digital news alerts are common among the public and they are trying to ignore these visuals. In
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with, particularly, computer-based posters have
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captivative and attractive visualisations to arouse the person's intention
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that particular
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. Whenever they have attempted to acquire
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to fulfil their own satisfac9 feelings in
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world.
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, whenever children had seen some toys or other equipment
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television advertisements , tried to convince their parents to get these things anyway.
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, the majority of companies have trusted with these technical visuals and videos which assist to increase their market sales as well as profit in their business activities.
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, some
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communities
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are not able to give their attention to these digital marketing methods because of their busy work schedules as well as they think it is a time-wasting way.
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, whenever employers had engaged to do their business works with internet platforms while they received advertisements
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their busy times as well as they tried to skip these distractions in that times.
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, they thought
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are unnecessary elements for them while no long they do not give attention
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it. In conclusion, in my perspective
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, as long as
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managers have attempted to grow their outputs
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these digital marketing methods in
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society .
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, customers should want to give their
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about these technological concepts in
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attentive way.
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, If we try to buy unnecessary equipment , it will waste our time as well as our money.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • capture attention
  • emotional engagement
  • targeting techniques
  • tailor ads
  • preferences
  • celebrity endorsements
  • influencer marketing
  • psychological tactics
  • scarcity
  • urgency
  • ad fatigue
  • effectiveness
  • coping mechanisms
  • ad blockers
  • saturated markets
  • innovative strategies
  • traditional methods
  • digital media
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