Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In the letter .give details of how you and your friends use the center .explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to you regarding your consideration about closing the sports and

leasure

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leisure

centre

that is

located in our neighbourhood in Kepez district in Antalya. Our family and friends from the area are very

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fond

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found

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fond

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this

place, we spend there most of our weekends and enjoy it very much. Kids get to learn how to swim in the

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swimming

swiming

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swimming

pool,

beeing

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being

looked after

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professional

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proffessional

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professional

trainer and we get to

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exercise

exersice

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exercise

in the gym during that time.

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there are local

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holidays

hollidays

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holidays

and celebrations that

ussually

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usually

are held in that building. So it would be a tremendous loss for locals if you would go with

this

closing issue. If

centre

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closes our children will not have experience

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swimming and having fun

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their spare time, as

for

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grown-ups

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grown ups

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, we will be left without a proper place for doing sports and keeping

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ourselves

ourselfs

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ourselves

busy. Even

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though

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thought

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there are several places that could be visited by locals, that

leasure

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pleasure

leisure

centre is our

favorite

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I understand how

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important

imprortant

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important

it is to save

the

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apply

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money

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nowadays

nowaydays

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nowadays

for a lot more problems that might be

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occurring

accruing

acquiring

accuring

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occurring

recently, I kindly ask you to reconsider your decision. Our community would

appressiate

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appreciate

your good thinking and doing the right thing for the city. Best regards, Ekaterina Shadenkova

Submitted by enika2009 on Wed Jun 15 2022

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219 words

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