Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In the letter .give details of how you and your friends use the center .explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to you regarding your consideration about closing the sports and

leasure

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leisure

centre

that is

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located in our neighbourhood in Kepez district in Antalya. Our family and friends from the area are very

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found

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this

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place, we spend there most of our weekends and enjoy it very much. Kids get to learn how to swim in the

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swimming

swiming

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swimming

pool,

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being

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professional

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proffessional

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trainer and we get to

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exercise

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exercise

in the gym during that time.

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there are local

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holidays

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holidays

and celebrations that

ussually

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usually

are held in that building. So it would be a tremendous loss for locals if you would go with

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closing issue. If

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closes our children will not have experience

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swimming and having fun

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their spare time, as

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grown-ups

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, we will be left without a proper place for doing sports and keeping

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ourselves

ourselfs

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busy. Even

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there are several places that could be visited by locals, that

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pleasure

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centre is our

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I understand how

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important

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important

it is to save

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money

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nowadays

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for a lot more problems that might be

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occurring

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occurring

recently, I kindly ask you to reconsider your decision. Our community would

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appreciate

your good thinking and doing the right thing for the city. Best regards, Ekaterina Shadenkova

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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