Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think government ought to invest more in education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of education both for young and old can not be overemphasized. Some people are of the opinion that government should allocate large funds

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adult education while it is generally believed that educating

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children is a normal phenomenon I totally disagree with the fact that government should invest

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nation's budget to sponsoring adult education and my reasons will be elucidated in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, children they say are the future of tomorrow. Equipping them with the necessary knowledge to have a better society in decades to come is very essential.

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and the world at large is a necessity. To achieve

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, youngsters are known for their ability to learn fast and putting whatever they have learnt to practice.

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encourage creativity and critical thinking for the young ones.

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, adulthood comes with different responsibilities and duties. The ages may wish to study and achieve good grades or qualifications to either get

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, the concentration of older people is usually distorted

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or family matters which will affect their grades, or even make them stop the study halfway.

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, most aged individuals usually

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more knowledge at their leisure with enough capital to sponsor themselves,

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individuals will be considered a waste of resources

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, training youngsters academically may be viewed as normal

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but allocating extra funds to sponsor older people's learning would be a waste of resources.