Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.

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Nowadays, e-learning has become very popular day by day because of its numerous benefits and facilities. While
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, traditional schooling will never deteriorate.
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, I will put forward my perception. To commence with, online training provides various benefits and amenities through applications which are either google meet
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zoom meeting
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youtube live classes or Skype etc.
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, virtual teaching saves
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time and money as we don't need to go
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need to stay in hostels.
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,
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system furnishes convenience and comfort to students as well as teachers
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, they can continue at their home itself.
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, due to lockdown officials and
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prohibited
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schools to maintain social distancing, at that time most
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the trainers used
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applications to clear
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doubts. Even it is helpful during examinations by clearing concepts through recorded videos. In fact, offline classes are more effective than online as we can learn communication skills and how to develop
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with classmates and mentors. For
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example, if we take children how they can communicate with other kids, how they can play and enjoy with friends through
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. There will be a chance to lack of discipline,
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of social living, cultures everything they miss. In conclusion, Both groups have their logical reasons to support their arguments. Even though web train has
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ability of convenience and
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budget friendly
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facilities, I believe that
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classes never be replaceable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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