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You bought a ticket to a music concert. however, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend. write a letter to your friend. in your letter:- - tell your friend the details about the concert. - explain why you are unable to go. - and explain how you friend can receive your ticket.

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Dear Joey, I hope you'll be fit and fine. As you know, I am a music lover like you so I purchased a
ticket
 for a music
concert
 in our area which I cannot attend so I want you to offer my
ticket
. In order to describe the event, it is a live music
concert
of
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Mr.
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Mr
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 B Jeck, a famous pop singer, at Newcera ground
on
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apply
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Next
 Saturday. It is nowhere hidden from anyone that I am a big fan of his like you;
however
, due to the annual general meeting on Friday of
next
 week, I am stuck with some essential reports that I have to submit before
next
tuesday
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Tuesday
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.
Hence
, I have no option left except to miss
this
concert
.
Thus
, I want you to enjoy the
concert
 on my
ticket
. Don't think about the expenses of the
ticket
 because I don't want anything in return. You can either download the
ticket
 from www.bconcert.com by inserting booking number P2729936 or you can get the
ticket
 on the same day of the
concert
 from the
ticket
 counter by showing the same number along with an ID proof. I hope you will accept my offer happily. Can't wait to hear from you soon. With love, Harry
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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