You bought a ticket to a music concert. however, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend. write a letter to your friend. in your letter:- - tell your friend the details about the concert. - explain why you are unable to go. - and explain how you friend can receive your ticket.

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Dear Joey, I hope you'll be fit and fine. As you know, I am a music lover like you so I purchased a

ticket

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for a music

concert

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in our area which I cannot attend so I want you to offer my

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. In order to describe the event, it is a live music

concert

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Mr.

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B Jeck, a famous pop singer, at Newcera ground

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Saturday. It is nowhere hidden from anyone that I am a big fan of his like you;

however

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, due to the annual general meeting on Friday of

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week, I am stuck with some essential reports that I have to submit before

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tuesday

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, I have no option left except to miss

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concert

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, I want you to enjoy the

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on my

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. Don't think about the expenses of the

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because I don't want anything in return. You can either download the

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from www.bconcert.com by inserting booking number P2729936 or you can get the

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on the same day of the

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from the

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counter by showing the same number along with an ID proof. I hope you will accept my offer happily. Can't wait to hear from you soon. With love, Harry

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

207 words

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