You bought a ticket to a music concert. however, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer your ticket to a friend. write a letter to your friend. in your letter:- - tell your friend the details about the concert. - explain why you are unable to go. - and explain how you friend can receive your ticket.

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Dear Joey, I hope you'll be fit and fine. As you know, I am a music lover like you so I purchased a

ticket

for a music

concert

in our area which I cannot attend so I want you to offer my

ticket

. In order to describe the event, it is a live music

concert

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Mr.

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B Jeck, a famous pop singer, at Newcera ground

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Saturday. It is nowhere hidden from anyone that I am a big fan of his like you;

however

, due to the annual general meeting on Friday of

week, I am stuck with some essential reports that I have to submit before

tuesday

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Hence

, I have no option left except to miss

this

concert

Thus

, I want you to enjoy the

concert

on my

ticket

. Don't think about the expenses of the

ticket

because I don't want anything in return. You can either download the

ticket

from www.bconcert.com by inserting booking number P2729936 or you can get the

ticket

on the same day of the

concert

from the

ticket

counter by showing the same number along with an ID proof. I hope you will accept my offer happily. Can't wait to hear from you soon. With love, Harry

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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4Grammar mistakes
 

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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