You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear John,
I hope you are doing good. I am glad you reached out for my advice to take one of the crucial decisions in your life. As I know you well, I think you should start work rather than college.
I have my own explanation for my opinion, you might not get significant time to achieve
desired
goal of becoming an artist, Change the article
the desired
this
is because these days most colleges are focused only on academics, as a result
, you might lose interest on
both studies and career. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, outdated
syllabus will not help you to gain knowledge Correct article usage
an outdated
on
current fashion and technology trends.
To fulfil your aspiration you Change preposition
of
also
need additional
budget for dance, music and acting classes that can be earned by choosing a job. Correct article usage
an additional
In addition
to your training, you might need consistent income for buying trending fashion clothes for your stage shows.
One of the best career choice
that I can suggest for you Change to a plural noun
choices
is join
as a Change the verb form
is to join
baby sitter
so that will give you Correct your spelling
babysitter
a
enough time to practice for drams as these schools normally operate only for Remove the article
apply
few
hours in a day, as result, you can spend more time focusing on your dream.
See you soon my man!.
Yours lovingly,
RanaCorrect article usage
a few
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