You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: • explain which course you are interested in • say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in a scholarship program at your university. To commence with, I have completed a bachelor's degree in Electronics and communication,

consequently

, I would like to gain a master's in the same course at your college. If

this

course is not available, my

priority is Artificial Intelligence. Moving demonstrate my knowledge about your university, It is an internationally recognised college with world-class infrastructure with the latest labs and equipment.

Moreover

,updated curriculum to support current trends due to which you have 100% placements.

Finally

, I am a toper in Electronics and Communication. In

this

course, I have gained deeper knowledge which helped me to win a global hackathon,

as a result

, I own a patent.

In addition

, My final year project is certified by the Indian Institute of Science and Technology as a distinct project of the year.

Thus

, I hope, I am the best for

this

program and

also

I will bring benefits to your college as I enhance your name and fame with my talent. Please respond at your earliest convenience!. Yours Faithfully, Rana

Submitted by rana on Fri Jun 17 2022

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