Many developed countries require aid from international organizations to grow. Many people think this aid should be financial, while others believe practical aid and advice are more useful. Discuss both views, and give your opinion?

The majority of the developing

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required financial assistance from international businesses to develop

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. Some people argue that

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help can be in the form of currency, while others say that, it should be in a practical and important decision format that will help

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financial aid will make a supporting

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burden, I believe the

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in improvement state to be self-sufficient with the practical experience from developed

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to follow. On the one hand,

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always need immediate financial assistance to withstand the requirement of the daily needs in emergencies.

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is because to provide the necessary commodities to its citizens required a lumpsum amount to be paid to import the materials at a proper time.

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, to meet up the currency fluctuations in many

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, the materials price goes skyrocketed which indeed puts the situation in high aid support.

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, in Srilanka, due to the collapse of the government and financial strike the price of all materials reached high and as a support,

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like the United States and the United Kingdom provided help to support the community in need.

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, the provision of useful knowledge in tackling the emergency situations will help the

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to develop in all ways with needed advice.

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, the

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which are fully developed already went through the hardships and downs, which can be a lesson learnt bible for others to refer

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mitigate the risks involved in taking the important decisions.

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, the role of mentorship provided by all the

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to the developing states gives a better delightful room for life expectancy.

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, in South Africa, the practical aid received from all summit states gives the opportunity to raise up to the international level with improved life living expectancy. To conclude, the developing

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required improvement help from outside companies.

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the assistance of money can put in heavy loss for helping

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to get bankrupt,

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, I believe it will be better for the

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that are in the developing stage to receive an enormous amount of useful tips and knowledge from other already developed

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around the planet.