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Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In the modern world,
men
 and
women
 are considered at
par
 with each other and
this
 has inculcated the idea of
gender
 equality.
This
 idea has seen a rise in recent history due to better access to amenities and a societal paradigm shift ,some may argue that we have achieved
this
 target but in my ,opinion
this
 milestone has not been achieved yet and we will discuss
this
 in detail with examples .
Firstly
, there is a significant increase in the number of
women
 entering the new business and corporate a.
This
 is possible due to the shift in social paradigm where
women
 are not only considered as the home-maker but
also
 considered as intelligently at
par
 with
men
 to run businesses .The idea has
also
 gained traction due to an increase in media coverage and access to better amenities for females which have helped the fairer sex to rise and enter the corporate world.
This
 has helped an increase in the number of
women
 getting elevated to the critical positions in the corporate world where
women
 are running the show and guiding corporations in achieving new heights.
However
, there are still areas where
women
 are not considered at
par
 with
men
 and
gender
 equality is still a distant dream. The prime example of
this
 is the combat areas like the army and navy , where
men
 are still considered superior to
women
 due to their physical strength. There is still a lot of work that has to be done in
this
 area to make both sexes at
par
 and it will take a considerable effort to achieve
this
 . As we have seen that we have made a few strides in
gender
 fairness but we are still yet to achieve
this
 in all avenues of society and
hence
 in my opinion
this
 is still not yet achieved.
This
 will take a considerable time to achieve
gender
 impartiality in all avenues of human society.
Submitted by f.abhishek on

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