A friend has invited you to a family dinner at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank him/her for inviting you ask for suggestions what you want to bring as a gift make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Dear Rina, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing good. It was a pleasant surprise to be invited to your house for a family dinner. I’m writing
this
letter to express my gratitude for the invitation and would to like invite you to my house soon. It’s been
such
a long time
to
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since to

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meet you, and your invitation to a family dinner
it
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apply

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means a lot to me. I'd like to bring a gift for you and your family to make a wonderful party. I have a suggestion about the gift
such
as pizza,champion which will make our dinner very joyful.
Moreover
, I insist you visit my hometown in
upcoming
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the upcoming

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christmas
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Christmas

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holidays. Please let me know your acceptance on a call by 16th January. Thank you for your invitation and hope to meet you soon. Best wishes, Kajol
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