A friend has invited you to a family dinner at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank him/her for inviting you ask for suggestions what you want to bring as a gift make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Dear Rina, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing good. It was a pleasant surprise to be invited to your house for a family dinner. I’m writing

this

letter to express my gratitude for the invitation and would to like invite you to my house soon. It’s been

such

a long time

Correct word choice

since to

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meet you, and your invitation to a family dinner

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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means a lot to me. I'd like to bring a gift for you and your family to make a wonderful party. I have a suggestion about the gift

such

as pizza,champion which will make our dinner very joyful.

Moreover

, I insist you visit my hometown in

upcoming

Correct article usage

the upcoming

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christmas

Change the capitalization

Christmas

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holidays. Please let me know your acceptance on a call by 16th January. Thank you for your invitation and hope to meet you soon. Best wishes, Kajol

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

142 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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